Term 2 writing sample

I am learning to:

1. Make my writing interesting by using describing words

2. Attempt to use capital letters and full-stops by myself

Success criteria:

I will know I can successfully do this when my writing shows

1. One or more Adjectives that match my picture

2.

• A capital letter at the start of my story and at the beginning of each new sentence.
•  A full-stop at the end of each of my ideas and at the end of my story.

Next steps:
1. Continue to add my detail to my story to make it more interesting for the reader.
2. Attempt to use other forms of punctuation such as commas and exclamation marks.

Student comment:
I am good at putting fullstops.
I could work on spelling good words and don't repeat words.