WALT: write a recount
Success criteria:
- The first paragraph says where, when, who, why and how.
- The events are in order.
- I will use time words (first, then, finally, etc.).
- My recount is written in the past tense.
- Details are added to make my writing interesting. Adding adjectives (no went!)
- I finish my writing by saying how I felt
A good start James. You have some detail and some time words in your writing. Next step - add more detail to your writing.
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